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If you are having difficulties thinhing up ideas at the right level of generalisation, then a good technique is to thing of very specific, concrete examples, and then try to find a higher level of abstraction that the examples belong to. Topic: The importance of animals to people is not always recognised. We should pay more attention to how we look after and protect animals. First you need to think how important animals are to people. Begin by thinking of specific animals - any animals: cow cat lion sheep dog kangaroo Now organize these under a higher level of classification, e.g. Domestic animals: cow dog cat sheep Wild animals: lion animals Think again, and come up with a sub-division of domestic animals Animals whose products we use: cow sheep Pets: dog cat Now we can go back to our to…

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A trick to instantly help your essay sound much more academic is to learn to write passively and to avoid phrases that use personal pronouns.

I think that -> It is thought that
I believe that -> It is believed that
Our world today -> The current global situation (or) In today's world

To see this in action, take the following 2 sentences as an example:
(1) Our world today is unstable in many ways.
(2) The current global situation is unstable in many ways.

In ancient Rome, aesthetical beauty was considered one of the main points with which humans judged each other as people. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? What traits do you feel best judge a person’s quality?

Thesis - It is disagreed that beauty acts as a reasonable marker by which people can assess each other. Instead, the qualities of patience and selflessness are felt to be better gauges of a person’s worth and this argument will be proven in this essay.

The age of information technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it. Eventually we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems. Form an opinion based on the info above and write a well-reasoned essay. Information technology has dramatically changed the way people live, interact and work. One of the main changes has been the introduction of computers to mainstream society. However, this current social set up has left large pockets of people who do not understand the many uses of technology. As this distances these people from the rest of society who are educated in the many uses of technology, it is believed major social problems will be created. The two main elements that will…

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4 Steps Fully understand the essay question (rewrite the essay question in different words) Brainstorm ideas (both sides) Decide the type of response to give Write the thesis (written as a direct response to essay question) The government should be permitted to censor the internet to help protect young people from offensive content. Do you agree or disagree? Form an opinion. 1. Diffenrent words - Should the government be able to block certain content that it deems inappropriate? 2. Brainstorm Support Tremendous amount of adult content on the internet that is widely available to children Refute Censoring the internet restricts an individual's freedom of speech May lead to a slower transfer of information, i.e. blocking certain news sites would mean internet users would not have as many out…